Thursday, October 4, 2012

How do you like my poem?


Question


How do you like my poem?
Theres something to be said,


Answer


Simon Says Total Garbage, your rhyme and rhythm were atrocities, and ohh so droll, I must do say that you are by far far the worst writer I have ever heard. Its unoriginal and pathetic.brbrPaula Honey, That was BEAUTIFUL! You are a GOD!, You are what T.S. Eliot and Poe and that other guy, whorshipped. You my fine sir are a lyricist beyond the creation of everything, I love you. Do my earrings look ok.brbrRandy Well, it was a bit unoriginal, and the word could have been more discripive, or emotive. I would have to say that was a very fair peice, not the best but if you gave more emphasis, and stronger rhythm it could be quite a formidibal poem, Id try reading some Frost, the phrasing of his poems are eloquent. You pass.



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